As the door slid open with a sharp screech, he could feel the odd sensation of danger, as if somebody was coming for his life. Lo and behold, he was indeed staring down the barrel of a gun. “Freeze!” He heard the voice shout out against him as the door continued to swing inwards. Carter […]Read more "Corridors Of Gunterlacs: Chapter 18"
Hi everyone! HoiHoiSoi here! Recently as I have had some feedback from a critic or two from the WebSerialFiction forums (Check it out! They have a bunch of very good authors there!) I have discovered that my writing does indeed lack in fundamental story telling elements all around which is dragging down the story. In […]Read more "Massive Overhaul For Corridors Of Gunterlacs"
After a while, Carter finally stood up with a solution at hand, now he just had to test it out. Pressing a few buttons in accordance to what he had jotted down, the walls started to move and turn about the room, following the instructions he had given it. “Not quite there yet.” Carter mumbled […]Read more "Corridors Of Gunterlacs: Chapter 17"
As the door swung open, Carter instantly knew what was in store for him. The room was what it seemed like a little dome colored in deep greys and dark blues. This color palate was used on the walls, floor and ceiling in an almost indiscriminate manner throughout. Right in the center of it all […]Read more "Corridors Of Gunterlacs: Chapter 16"